Comments on: Christmas Anthology https://grahamclements.com/christmas-anthology/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=christmas-anthology Writer, blogger, and dreamer. Mon, 23 Sep 2024 14:30:33 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.6.4 By: Graham Clements https://grahamclements.com/christmas-anthology/#comment-1086 Sun, 03 Jan 2016 23:49:32 +0000 https://grahamclements.com/christmas-anthology/#comment-1086 Thanks Anthony. I am glad you successfully downloaded it. I had never used the service I put it on before. After writing in first person for a over a year, I found it hard to go back to writing in third person for the story. I reckon the story would have flowed more if I was in third person mode before I started writing it. The first draft was around 9200 words so I did manage to cut it down. Oh, and when I read it again, I saw changes I would make. Interestingly, I have another story written from the point of view of a dog, a golden retriever, owned by a scientist, and on a similar theme, but set in Australia.

]]> By: Anthony J. Langford https://grahamclements.com/christmas-anthology/#comment-1087 Sun, 03 Jan 2016 23:35:42 +0000 https://grahamclements.com/christmas-anthology/#comment-1087 What a unique story! Your writing style is very good, easy to follow. I liked your world building. I was perhaps a little confused at times, but that kept me pushing on, wanting to find out what was going on. My only criticism and its not a big one is that I found it a bit long, even though there was a lot going on. But I liked the Christmas aspect and the ending of course. Very interesting, original and creative. Congratulations!
Great to read something of yours!

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