currently doing National Novel Writing Month. The aim is to write 50,000 words
for the month. As of a few moments ago I have written 1826 words for the day,
which betters the daily target of 1667 words. My best daily total is 2430
words. All up I have written 37345 words, so I am currently 2345 words ahead of
schedule. But I need to get further ahead as next week I have a few days where
my writing time is reduced, and I won’t be writing at all on Saturday week
because of an all day and late into the night job as a polling assistant.
I am very much enjoying the science fiction young adult story
I am writing. The novel can easily be divided into five parts, and I am just at
the end of part two, which suggests it will be about 90,000 words. A bit
shorter than my other drafts of novels.
I do worry about a few things though. Do I have too much
dialogue? Recently I have begun to include short past tense (the novel is
written in present tense) summaries of what the four main characters said and
decided to do.
I also worry about the amount of swearing I have
included. When I was a kid we swore out heads off, but I have a feeling I will
be cutting down on the swearing when I edit it.
Another worry comes from the novel being in first person and
from the one character’s POV. Everything is described from an 18-year-old’s
limited knowledge of the world and the people in it. So sometimes his
descriptions and conclusions are dead wrong. I worry readers might say that is
wrong, and think the author should have checked his facts, rather than the
reader knowing that it is just the character who is wrong.
The last point makes the writing easier in some ways
because I don’t have to fact check everything my character says. If he thinks
the moon might be bigger in the northern hemisphere, then that is what he
thinks. I don’t need to bother to check whether he is right.
Anyway, I must get back to writing and see if I can beat
my best daily total so far.
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You're kicking ass Graham!
Dont worry about what others think – I've also had these worries – it's their problem.. if ppl assume it's the author's opinion then they are crediting you with being a good fiction writer.. a mistake however…
Fuck the swearing, it's fuckin alright hey!
Great work mate.
Anthony, I am taking the novel somewhere more serious than I thought it would go – an exploration of teenage agnst and how teenagers interact with each other as well as a science fiction adventure.
Sounds very interesting Graham.
Hope it works out well. Certainly a market there, if you can crack it.